Revise, revise, revise.
OK. I tried to write a draft, but
mostly made Dr. Chandler confused about my focus, which, of course, wasn't
really there. Chickens and basket
companies have some correlation, but only in my mind, I guess. With that said, I think the best way to revise my road trip
story is to focus more on the fact that I really like to take road trips,
especially the ones that are serendipitous.
I've loved to travel since I was young, remembering the Sunday afternoon
drives my family used to make in Mom’s 1970-ish black Ford Country Squire station
wagon with the fake wood panels on the side, my father at the wheel and Mom in
the front seat with him, my two brothers in the middle seat, and with me
sitting in the back-back, which was the third row seat and facing out the back
window. Nowadays that kind of car would
never be made, and of course, this was in the day before seat belts too, but I
digress.
Well, maybe I need to digress to do some revision. I would think that I would add some stories
about my love of car travel, perhaps reminiscing about my youth’s travels, then
moving into my high school years of traveling with my friends’ families, and
later as an adult. I've been asked along
on many journeys over the years, and I think in my revision, I’ll include some
of the events of those trips.
One road trip I recall was sometime around 1976 when I took
a last minute trip to New Haven, Connecticut, just to bring my friend’s friend
back home, after he was visiting here and totaled his car while here. I went along just to keep my friend company
on the trip back to New Jersey, and while driving up along I-95 through New
York City, there was a fist fight right there on the highway, in the middle of
a traffic jam…perhaps it was the cause of the traffic jam. Only in New York City would this have
occurred, and it is still quite vivid in my mind. Road rage to the extreme, I suppose. I’m full of stories—maybe just full of IT—but
memories of road trips abound, and, so, I guess I should focus on those
memories in my revision, but tell a chicken tale (tail?) or two, since those trips were
also serendipitous.
I laughed at your back-back comment, because I remember sitting back there as a kid, too. No seatbelt, or maybe just lap belts, facing out the back window, waving at everyone.
ReplyDeleteI'm excited to see your revision!
No seat belts when I was young! I think I didn't have seat belts until I got my first brand new car, and that was in 1979!
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